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Part 2 — What Danielle Asked Before She D!ed
Danielle Moreau was diagnosed with breast c@ncer when Sophie was nineteen.
The diagnosis was the particular, stage-three, the-staging-is-the-severity, the-severity-is-the-information, the-information-is-the-sentence sentence that a doctor delivers when the doctor’s patient has been tested and the testing has produced the staging and the staging produces the prognosis and the prognosis is the thing the patient carries from the office to the car to the house to the kitchen where the patient calls her best friend and the friend picks up on the second ring.
I picked up on the second ring. Danielle told me. I drove to her house. I sat at her kitchen table. The table where we had been sitting for fifteen years. The table where the friendship was maintained through the particular, weekly, sometimes-daily, the-table-is-the-place, coffee-and-talking practice that two women produce when the producing is the friendship and the friendship is the table and the table is the thing the fifteen years were performed at.
Danielle told me the treatment would be aggressive. Chemotherapy. Radiation. The particular, multi-month, body-altering, the-treatment-is-the-fighting, the-fighting-is-the-only-option protocol that the oncologist recommended and the recommending was the thing the diagnosis demanded.
The treatment lasted fourteen months. I was there for the first ten. I drove Danielle to appointments. I sat in waiting rooms. I helped Sophie with the groceries when Danielle’s energy was consumed by the treatment and the consuming left nothing for the groceries and the nothing was the gap I filled.
During month eleven, Danielle asked me to come to the hospital.
She was admitted for the last time. The particular, the-treatment-has-been-attempted, the-attempting-has-not-produced-the-result, the-result-is-the-admission admission that a hospital performs when the patient’s treatment has been exhausted and the exhausting is the condition the admission reflects.
Danielle held my hand. She told me to look after Sophie.
The asking was performed in a hospital bed. The particular, this-is-what-I-need-you-to-do, the-needing-is-the-asking, the-asking-is-the-promise request that a mother performs when the mother’s time is limited and the limitation produces the asking and the asking is directed at the person the mother trusts and the trusting is the friendship and the friendship is the fifteen years.
She told me Sophie would be alone. She told me Sophie’s father left when Sophie was six. She told me the leaving was total. No contact. No support. No return. She told me the alone would be the condition Sophie would be inside when the treatment’s exhausting produced the ending and the ending was approaching.
She told me Sophie needed someone. She told me the someone was me. She told me the being-someone was the promise and the promising was the thing the friendship required because the friendship had been the fifteen years and the fifteen years had produced the trust and the trust was the thing the promise was based on.
I promised. At the hospital bed. Holding Danielle’s hand. The particular, of-course, I-will, you-don’t-even-need-to-ask, this-is-what-friends-do ease that a promise contains when the promise is made inside the assumption that the promising is the thing the friendship demands and the demanding is the thing the promising serves.
Danielle d!ed three weeks later.
The funeral was on a Wednesday. I attended. David attended. Sophie stood at the front of the room. Twenty-one years old. Alone. The particular, this-is-the-aloneness, the-aloneness-is-visible, the-visible-is-the-standing, the-standing-is-performed-without-the-parent aloneness that a funeral produces when the funeral is for the last parent and the last is the word that makes the aloneness total.
I held Sophie after the funeral. I told her I would be there. I told her the being-there was the promise I made to Danielle. I told her the promise was permanent.
The promise lasted approximately two months.
The withdrawing began in month three. The withdrawing was not a decision. The withdrawing was the particular, gradual, each-visit-is-harder, the-harder-is-the-grief, the-grief-is-triggered-by-the-face, the-face-is-Danielle’s erosion that the grief produced when the grief’s trigger was the proximity and the proximity was Sophie and Sophie was the face that carried Danielle’s face and the carrying was the thing the grief could not absorb.
Every time I saw Sophie, I saw Danielle. The seeing was the particular, involuntary, I-cannot-control-this, the-face-activates-the-memory, the-memory-activates-the-grief response that a brain produces when the brain has associated a face with the loss and the association is triggered by the seeing and the seeing produces the grieving and the grieving produces the pain and the pain produces the avoiding and the avoiding is the withdrawing.
I withdrew. The calls became less frequent. The visits became fewer. The particular, every-two-weeks-became-monthly, monthly-became-occasional, occasional-became-none erosion that a promise undergoes when the promising person’s grief is consuming the promise’s maintenance and the consuming produces the erosion and the erosion produces the nothing and the nothing is the withdrawn.
I told myself Sophie was fine. Sophie was twenty-one. Sophie was an adult. Sophie had a job. Sophie had her mother’s apartment. Sophie was handling the alone the way adults handle the alone, through the managing and the coping and the particular, I-am-not-a-child, I-can-do-this independence that a twenty-one-year-old performs when the performing is the only option the alone provides.
I told myself the withdrawing was temporary. The temporary that was not temporary. The temporary that lasted eighteen months. The temporary that was the breaking of the promise I made at Danielle’s hospital bed.
David told me once, during month six, that I should call Sophie. He told me Sophie had been asking about me. He told me the asking was the particular, why-doesn’t-Aunt-Beth-call-anymore, the-asking-is-the-wondering, the-wondering-is-the-hurting question that Sophie was performing because the performing was the response to the withdrawing and the withdrawing was the thing the asking was about.
I told David I would call. I did not call. The not-calling was the withdrawing’s maintenance. The maintaining was the particular, I-will-do-it-tomorrow, tomorrow-became-next-week, next-week-became-never postponing that a person performs when the person’s grief has made the doing painful and the pain produces the postponing and the postponing produces the not-doing.
David stopped asking me to call. Not because David stopped caring. Because David started doing. The particular, I-will-do-it-myself, the-myself-is-the-response-to-the-not-doing, the-response-is-the-stepping-in decision that a person makes when the person has watched the not-doing and the not-doing has produced the gap and the gap is the thing the person decides to fill.
David filled the gap. Without telling me. For eighteen months.
Part 3 — What David Did for Eighteen Months
David’s visiting began in month three. The month the withdrawing began. The month the calls became less frequent. The month the gap opened.
David told me this in the maternity room. After the recognition. After the pallor. After Sophie looked at me from the bed with the baby in her arms and the looking was the particular, she-is-here, she-finally-came, the-coming-is-eighteen-months-late look of a young woman whose young woman had been waiting for the person the promise was made by and the waiting had lasted eighteen months and the eighteen months ended in a maternity room.
David told me he started visiting Sophie because Sophie called him. Not me. Sophie called David because the calling-me had been producing the voicemail and the voicemail was the response the withdrawing generated and the generating was the thing Sophie experienced as the rejection and the rejection was the thing Sophie could not continue calling into.
Sophie called David. She asked David whether I was angry with her. She asked David whether she had done something wrong. She asked David whether the withdrawing was the punishment and the punishing was the thing Sophie was trying to understand.
The questions broke David. The particular, a-twenty-one-year-old-is-asking-whether-she-did-something-wrong, the-asking-is-the-evidence-that-the-withdrawing-is-producing-the-self-blame, the-self-blame-is-the-thing-I-cannot-allow devastation that a man experiences when the man hears a young woman whose mother has d!ed asking whether the not-calling is her fault and the fault-assigning is the thing the man cannot permit.
David told Sophie the withdrawing was not her fault. He told Sophie the withdrawing was the grief’s product. He told Sophie the grief was mine and the mine’s processing was the withdrawing and the withdrawing was the processing’s method and the method was not directed at Sophie even though the method’s effect was directed at Sophie because the effect does not distinguish between the intention and the impact.
David told Sophie he would be there. He told her the being-there was his promise. Not Danielle’s promise to me. His promise. Made at a kitchen table. To a twenty-one-year-old girl whose girl needed someone and whose someone was not the person Danielle designated because the designated person had withdrawn.
David visited Sophie weekly. He checked on her. He helped with the apartment when the apartment needed the helping. He took Sophie to the dentist when the dentist appointment required the driving and the driving was the thing Sophie did not have because Sophie did not have a car and the not-having was the condition the alone produced.
David did not tell me. The not-telling was the particular, deliberate, she-will-feel-guilty, the-guilt-will-produce-the-obligation, the-obligation-is-not-the-caring, the-caring-must-be-chosen decision that David made when David assessed that the telling would produce my guilt and the guilt would produce the obligatory visiting and the obligatory was not the thing Sophie needed because Sophie needed the genuine and the genuine was the thing the obligation could not produce.
David wanted me to return to Sophie because the returning was chosen. Not because the returning was produced by the guilt the telling would generate. The returning had to be the choosing. And the choosing had to be mine. And the mine required the grieving’s processing and the processing required the time the processing demanded and the demanding was the thing David was waiting for.
David waited. For eighteen months. While visiting Sophie. While maintaining the connection. While performing the promise I broke.
Six months ago, Sophie told David she was pregnant.
The pregnancy was unplanned. The father was a man Sophie had been seeing for three months. The man left when the pregnancy was disclosed. The leaving was the particular, the-pattern, Sophie’s-father-left, the-baby’s-father-left, the-leaving-is-the-pattern, the-pattern-is-the-men repetition that the leaving had performed across two generations and the performing was the thing Sophie experienced and the experiencing was the alone performed again.
Sophie was alone. Pregnant. Twenty-three. The alone that was the condition Danielle asked me to prevent through the promise I broke.
David was there. David drove Sophie to the prenatal appointments. David helped Sophie prepare the apartment for the baby. David was the person Sophie called when the contractions started. David drove Sophie to the hospital. David was in the waiting room when Sophie’s baby was born.
The baby was born three days before my surgery. The timing was the particular, both-events-in-the-same-hospital, the-hospital-holds-both, the-maternity-ward-and-the-surgical-ward, the-two-wards-hold-the-two-events coincidence that the timing produced and the producing placed David inside a hospital that contained his wife and the girl his wife had promised to look after and the two were in different wards and the different was the hallway and the hallway was the left and the right and David walked both.
David visited Sophie every day because Sophie had no one else. The every-day was the thing the nurse observed. The nurse saw David every day because David came every day. David came every day because the every-day was the thing Sophie’s alone required.
David visited me two or three times a week because the two-or-three was the frequency the every-day-for-Sophie permitted. David’s days contained the driving-to-the-hospital and the visiting-Sophie and the visiting-me and the particular, splitting, the-time-is-divided, the-dividing-is-performed-between-the-two allocation that David performed because the allocating was the only option the two-events-in-the-same-hospital produced.
David walked left for Sophie. David walked right for me. The left and the right were the hallway’s two directions. The two directions held the two people David was visiting. The two people were inside the same building and the same man’s care and the same man’s time.
David did not tell me about Sophie because the telling would have been performed inside the hospital bed and the hospital bed was the location of the recovery and the recovery required the particular, no-stress, the-doctors-said-rest, the-resting-is-the-condition-the-recovery-demands environment that the doctors prescribed and the prescribing meant the telling’s stress was the thing the environment could not accommodate.
David planned to tell me after the recovery. After the discharge. After the particular, home, rested, the-body-has-healed, the-healing-permits-the-conversation condition that David was waiting for because the waiting was the timing and the timing was the thing David was managing.
The nurse disrupted the timing. The nurse’s disclosure produced the hallway. The hallway produced the following. The following produced the maternity room. The maternity room produced the recognition.
The timing David was managing was managed instead by a nurse who saw a tall man with gray hair and a blue jacket every day and who told the man’s wife the man was there every day and the telling was the thing that disrupted everything David was managing.
Part 4 — What Sophie Said to Me in the Room
Sophie looked at me from the bed.
The looking was the particular, eighteen-months, the-eighteen-months-are-in-the-looking, the-looking-contains-the-withdrawing-and-the-alone-and-the-pregnancy-and-the-baby accumulated looking of a young woman whose young woman has been waiting for a person and the waiting lasted eighteen months and the person is now in the doorway holding a walker.
She told me she missed me.
The sentence landed with the particular, three-words, the-three-words-contain-the-eighteen-months, the-eighteen-months-are-inside-the-missed weight of a sentence spoken by a young woman whose missing has been the condition the withdrawing produced and the producing lasted eighteen months and the eighteen months are inside the three words.
She told me she understood. She told me the understanding was produced by David’s explaining. David explained the grief. David explained the triggering. David explained the face and the resemblance and the particular, every-time-Aunt-Beth-sees-you-she-sees-your-mother, the-seeing-is-the-grieving, the-grieving-is-the-withdrawing mechanism that David described to Sophie so Sophie would not believe the withdrawing was the rejection the withdrawing appeared to be.
She told me she looked like her mother. She told me the looking-like was the thing she could not change. She told me the not-changing was the genetics and the genetics were the thing her mother gave her and the giving was the face and the face was the thing the grief could not separate from the loss because the face and the loss were connected by the resemblance and the resemblance was the permanent reminder.
She told me she waited for me to come back. She told me the waiting was performed across the eighteen months. She told me the waiting was the hoping and the hoping was the thing David’s visiting maintained because David’s visiting said the connection was alive and the alive meant the returning was possible and the possible was the thing the hoping was about.
Then she held the baby toward me.
The holding-toward was the particular, this-is-for-you, the-for-you-is-the-offering, the-offering-is-the-baby gesture of a young woman whose young woman is offering her baby to the woman who withdrew and whose withdrawing is being answered by the offering because the offering is the trust and the trust is the thing the eighteen months did not eliminate.
The trust survived the withdrawing. The trust was maintained by David’s visiting. The visiting said the connection was alive. The alive said the returning was possible. And the possible maintained the trust.
Sophie told me the baby’s name.
She told me the baby’s name was Danielle.
Danielle. Named for the mother. Named for the friend. Named for the woman who asked me to look after Sophie at a hospital bed and whose asking was the promise I broke and whose name was now on the baby the promise’s breaking had been performing its absence inside of.
I held the baby.
I held Danielle.
The holding was the particular, newborn, three-days-old, the-weight-is-the-lightness, the-lightness-is-the-heaviest-thing-I-have-ever-held holding of a baby whose baby’s weight was seven pounds and whose seven pounds contained the name and the name contained the friend and the friend contained the promise and the promise contained the eighteen months and the eighteen months contained the withdrawing and the withdrawing was the thing the holding was now addressing because the holding was the returning and the returning was the thing the withdrawing denied.
I cried. The particular, standing-in-the-maternity-ward, holding-a-baby-named-Danielle, the-baby-is-the-promise, the-promise-is-the-friend, the-friend-is-the-name, I-broke-the-promise-and-the-promise-is-in-my-arms crying of a woman whose crying is the grief and the guilt and the love performed simultaneously because the three cannot be separated and the not-separating is the crying and the crying is the only response the three can share.
David stood beside me. He placed his hand on my back. The particular, I-am-here, the-here-is-the-thing-I-have-been, I-have-been-here-for-eighteen-months, the-months-were-the-filling, the-filling-was-the-gap-you-left presence of a man whose presence was the thing that maintained the connection the withdrawing was severing.
I told Sophie I was sorry.
The sorry covered the eighteen months. The not-calling. The not-visiting. The voicemails Sophie left that I did not return. The particular, comprehensive, every-component-of-the-withdrawing, the-withdrawing-is-the-thing-the-sorry-addresses totality of the sorry that the eighteen months required.
Sophie told me the sorry was received. She told me the receiving was the thing the eighteen months had been waiting for. She told me the waiting was over.
She told me Danielle was waiting too.
She meant the baby. The baby whose name was the friend. The baby whose baby had been waiting for Aunt Beth because Aunt Beth was the name the waiting was directed at and the directing was the promise and the promise said Aunt Beth would be there and the being-there was now being performed in the maternity room eighteen months late.
The being-there was late. The being-there arrived.
Part 5 — What the Left Turn Built
I was discharged from the hospital four days after the maternity room.
The discharging was the particular, the-surgery’s-recovery-permits-the-leaving, the-leaving-is-the-going-home departure that a patient performs when the patient’s recovery has progressed to the point the doctor describes as sufficient for home care and the sufficiency is the discharge and the discharging is the leaving.
Before I left, I walked to the maternity ward. Not with the walker. Without the walker. The recovery had progressed. The progression permitted the walking without the walker and the without was the improvement and the improvement was the evidence the recovery was producing.
I walked to Sophie’s room. Sophie was being discharged that morning too. The baby was three days old when I found them. The baby was now seven days old. The baby was Danielle. The baby was going home.
Sophie’s home was the apartment. Danielle’s apartment. The apartment where Danielle raised Sophie. The apartment whose apartment was the last address Danielle occupied and the occupying was the thing the apartment held and the holding was the thing Sophie maintained by continuing to live inside the apartment the holding provided.
I drove Sophie and baby Danielle home. David drove beside us in his car. The two cars were the particular, caravan, the-caravan-is-the-family, the-family-is-the-people-the-caravan-contains convoy that the driving produced and the producing was the delivering and the delivering was the bringing-home and the bringing-home was the thing the promise required.
I helped Sophie into the apartment. I placed the baby’s carrier on the table where Danielle and I had sat for fifteen years. The table that held the friendship. The table that now held the baby whose name was the friendship’s name.
I stayed. Not for the afternoon. For the week. The particular, I-am-here, the-here-is-the-thing-the-withdrawing-denied, the-denying-is-now-being-reversed, the-reversing-is-the-staying presence that a woman performs when the woman has been absent for eighteen months and the absence has produced the gap and the gap is being filled by the staying and the staying is the filling.
David and I established a schedule. The schedule was the particular, coordinated, he-visits-on-these-days, I-visit-on-these-days, the-days-cover-the-week arrangement that two people produce when the two people are supporting a young mother and the supporting requires the covering and the covering requires the coordination.
David’s every-day became our every-day. The shift from David-alone to David-and-Beth was the transition. The transition was the promise’s restoration. The restoration said the promise Danielle asked for was now being performed by both people and the both was the thing Danielle’s asking was directed at because the asking was directed at me and David was the man who stepped in when the directing’s target withdrew and the withdrawing was now over.
David told me once, during an evening on Sophie’s porch while the baby slept inside, that the every-day was the hardest thing he had ever done.
Not the visiting. The not-telling. The particular, I-am-visiting-Sophie-every-day-and-I-cannot-tell-my-wife, the-not-telling-is-the-weight, the-weight-is-the-secret weight that David carried because the carrying was the secret and the secret was the visiting and the visiting was performed without my knowledge because the knowledge would have produced the guilt and the guilt was not the thing Sophie needed.
He told me he wanted me to return on my own. Not because of guilt. Because of choosing. The choosing was the thing the returning required because the choosing was the genuine and the genuine was the only thing Sophie deserved.
He told me the every-day at the hospital, the walking-left while I was thirty feet to the right, was the particular, this-is-the-hardest-hallway, the-hallway-holds-both-people, I-am-walking-toward-one-and-away-from-the-other navigation that a man performs when the man’s care is divided and the dividing is performed inside a hallway and the hallway’s two directions hold the two people the care serves.
He told me walking left was not walking away from me. Walking left was walking toward the promise. The promise that I made and broke. The promise that he assumed. The assuming was the love. Not the romantic love. The particular, this-is-what-a-person-does, the-doing-is-the-decency, the-decency-is-the-love, Danielle-was-your-friend-and-Sophie-is-her-daughter-and-someone-has-to-be-there love that a man performs when the man has assessed the situation and the assessing has produced the deciding and the deciding is the being-there.
I looked at David on Sophie’s porch.
I told him the nurse was right.
David asked me what the nurse said.
I told him the nurse said I had a good husband.
David looked at the porch. He looked at the door where the baby was sleeping inside. He looked at the house that was Danielle’s and that was now Sophie’s and that was now baby Danielle’s.
He told me the nurse was describing a man who walked left. He told me a good husband would have told his wife. He told me the not-telling was the thing the good did not include.
I told David the good was the doing. Not the telling. The doing was the visiting and the maintaining and the driving-to-appointments and the being-there-when-the-baby-was-born. The doing was the thing the good was made of. And the good was the thing I saw when I pushed open the maternity room door and the door revealed my husband standing beside a young woman whose mother was my best friend and whose baby was named for the friend and whose naming was the thing the promise produced.
On quiet evenings, I sat on Sophie’s porch.
The porch that had been Danielle’s. The porch where Danielle and I sat for fifteen years. The porch whose porch was the friendship’s location and the friendship’s memory and the friendship’s continuation because the continuation was the baby and the baby was inside and the inside was the apartment the friendship built.
Sophie brought tea. The tea that Danielle made. The same brand. The same cups. The particular, this-is-what-Mom-used, the-using-is-the-maintaining, the-maintaining-is-the-connection practice that a daughter performs when the daughter maintains the mother’s practices because the maintaining is the holding and the holding is the only holding available.
Baby Danielle slept in the carrier beside the porch chair. The sleeping was the particular, newborn, the-world-is-new, the-sleeping-is-the-processing, the-processing-is-performed-through-the-sleeping rest of a baby whose baby’s world was the apartment and the porch and the people the porch held.
The porch held three people and a baby. Sophie. Beth. David. Danielle.
The four names. The living and the named-for. The named-for that said the friendship continued. The continuing that said the promise was being kept. The keeping that said the withdrawing was over. The over that said the returning had arrived.
David sat beside me. The man who walked left. The man who walked toward the promise I walked away from. The man whose walking was the particular, every-day, sustained, anonymous, the-wife-did-not-know, the-not-knowing-was-the-carrying devotion of a man who carried a promise across eighteen months because the carrying was the thing the promise’s breaking required someone to perform and the someone was the husband and the husband performed it.
The porch was quiet. The tea was warm. The baby was sleeping. The promise was kept.
